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why don't you ever look me in the eye?
why?
        because your eyes remind me of something i never wanted to do.
that's why.
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Chezzy-Am's avatar
(gulp) damn this was strong stuff...

But honestly, it was very well written! Honestly, you've done an amazing job. The way this poem just... oozes its emotions out in that last line, it is placed perfectly! It is very much a perfect placement right here I tell ya!

:clap: your-methamphetamine would be more than happy to read this work! And so would KathrynODriscoll and imaginative-lioness . Its very well written!